Monday, August 11, 2008

Nobody knows it's empty
This smile that i wear
The real one is left in the past
becos u hav left me there


Nobody Knows i'm crying
They won't even see my tears
When they think i m laughing
i still wishing u were here


Nobody knows it's painful
they think that i m strong
they say that this won't kill me
but i wonder if they were wrong


Nobody knows i m praying
that u'll change my mind
they think i had let u go
when u left me behind


nobody knows i miss u
they think i feel set free
but i feel like i m bound with chains
trapped in the mystery


Nobody knows i need you
they say i can do it on my own
but they don't know i m crying
when i m all alone................

9 comments:

Sandhya said...

Hmm...............

Too gud.

Abhishek Shrivastava said...

Gud Stuff dear...

anshul said...

very nice Dear....
heart touchng

Ashish said...

Thank you very much every one for posting ur comments.......

Unknown said...

gr8 bhaiya.......

Unknown said...

"Nobody knows it's painful
they think that i m strong"

Oh i see!
i m present in this poem as "nobody" who thinks tht u r strong. :)

good work

Ashish said...

Thanks Naresh... and we all r vulnerable at some or other points of life...... being strong is just a mindset....nothing else.....

parul said...

it is really too good...
i like the way u pour ur heart in words like this...

Anonymous said...

{we all r vulnerable at some or other points of life...... being strong is just a mindset....nothing else.....}

Beautiful poem, Ashish, you are gifted, do not take it for granted; make use ur talent coz not every1 is this fortunate! Looking forward to ur next update.

love